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  1. WindSage on Chapter 2 Thu 15 Dec 2016 02:23AM UTC

    ah quite interesting... I mean always with the legends of old being stronger at THIS time... well powers are still free and wildly raging.
    So that will be fun. I am enjoying Hashiramas fumbiling seduction of sorts!.

     

    yeah I don't either in that they really diddnt make his character anything interesting enough to use? although your denying chance if the mother is extra special good that adopts kids so brothers but less his direct more flair, but removes the aspects of a Father leading a clan under fire after losing children........ but Mother actually cheating would be interesting? but I dunno. still your totally right in you can take it anyway you want.

    yeah one thing that I always dislike is the worlds where its clearly established that their are other forces than humanity but they don't SHOW them, and while it be interesting as ANYTHING fi its the aftermath of the empires crumbiling.... but if given NOTHING it can get.... so good luck on that. like the Clans themselves seem SO MUCH like a post dark age an empire crumbled and everyone started running about here or there. I got to imagine that near all the clans are some branch of districts of Asura, and Indara and any other kids, gradually over centuries other clans time by time but eventually whatever main power of the empire(s) BROKE.

    but yes giving other races but making them not something that could be equals or CHALLENGES to humans is just boring. so good luck! really quite curious.

    ah forgot about that. never did quite... that be interesting.
    but yes the nicknames are so much more interesting!
    and Tobiramas code of conduct for Shinobi is so much more INTERESTING now I know he started making that as a way that all the clans arnt in death dealing no matter where they go, as all shinobi are a bit peripatetic... because I forget the word for clans that have no settled land thing.
    but part of his thing was a you don't give out clan names and that all publically don't do this or that to allow shinobi and the settled areas to not suddenly break out into death dealing and chaos.

    but if you add in actual POWERS with giving names... .and you KNOW but if no formal established RULE that perhaps this time for the pretty lady give her your name....
    well. anyway good stuff and thank you for writing things!

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