I am going to love when she turns out to be the princess or the sister of the princess or something. I do love this? although very odd and quite mean to daddy. so sad! I mean intentionally a hardass but abusive meanie is... .hmm. and mother saitified because dead? but freaking ADORABLE, and Hashirama wondering about his old friend and YES because back to a time of a skipping and a throwing rocks!
but...... while I ENJOY seriously it can not be understand ENJOY mixing more things than just humana nd summons in the power dynamics of it and I do get that when Hashirama is actually comfortable with you he does his sqeeky sorry! and going into a corner to sulk thing ... but while WItches be powerful upon powerful.... just member that Hashirama is powerful too? even if not to HIS OWN great degree but still respectable, all ninjas should be?
anyway.I stil lfind it terrible amusing because flowers and tree man along with witch and diddnt actually ask for the ladys NAME HOW COULD YOU HASHY!!!!!!
No, I'm afraid Mito is neither the princess nor the princess' sister. She's really a sea witch, not a member of the Uzumaki clan.
I'm afraid I don't have any pity for Butsuma and I think this is fairly fair to his character in canon, given his treatment of his children and the whole child soldier thing. Admittedly, he has a different perspective and the fact that this is told from Hashirama's perspective does him no favors, but still. And this is fanfiction, so I'm taking liberties with Butsuma and Hashirama's mother and their relationship for the sake of this story and other stories in this particular fic universe.
Hashirama is powerful. I never said he wasn't. He's still an extremely powerful and capable shinobi. But in this particular story, he's also still quite young and he hasn't had the opportunity to match his powers against a witch, and witches are powerful upon powerful. I personally enjoy stories where non-humans are extremely dangerous and generally and naturally more powerful than humans, and that it takes quite a lot for a human to match or outmatch a non-human.
Also, Hashirama hasn't asked for her name because of the whole power of names thing in fairy tales and the fact that he's a shinobi. That's just how things are going to work until there's more trust between them and at this point, he hasn't volunteered his name because neither has she and vice versa.
ah quite interesting... I mean always with the legends of old being stronger at THIS time... well powers are still free and wildly raging. So that will be fun. I am enjoying Hashiramas fumbiling seduction of sorts!.
yeah I don't either in that they really diddnt make his character anything interesting enough to use? although your denying chance if the mother is extra special good that adopts kids so brothers but less his direct more flair, but removes the aspects of a Father leading a clan under fire after losing children........ but Mother actually cheating would be interesting? but I dunno. still your totally right in you can take it anyway you want.
yeah one thing that I always dislike is the worlds where its clearly established that their are other forces than humanity but they don't SHOW them, and while it be interesting as ANYTHING fi its the aftermath of the empires crumbiling.... but if given NOTHING it can get.... so good luck on that. like the Clans themselves seem SO MUCH like a post dark age an empire crumbled and everyone started running about here or there. I got to imagine that near all the clans are some branch of districts of Asura, and Indara and any other kids, gradually over centuries other clans time by time but eventually whatever main power of the empire(s) BROKE.
but yes giving other races but making them not something that could be equals or CHALLENGES to humans is just boring. so good luck! really quite curious.
ah forgot about that. never did quite... that be interesting. but yes the nicknames are so much more interesting! and Tobiramas code of conduct for Shinobi is so much more INTERESTING now I know he started making that as a way that all the clans arnt in death dealing no matter where they go, as all shinobi are a bit peripatetic... because I forget the word for clans that have no settled land thing. but part of his thing was a you don't give out clan names and that all publically don't do this or that to allow shinobi and the settled areas to not suddenly break out into death dealing and chaos.
but if you add in actual POWERS with giving names... .and you KNOW but if no formal established RULE that perhaps this time for the pretty lady give her your name.... well. anyway good stuff and thank you for writing things!
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