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  1. MasqueofPlague on Chapter 6 Wed 20 Mar 2024 02:32AM UTC

    🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 AWWW 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 It's crazy to me that people were WAITING for the update, omg 🥺🥺🥺 (afalsfjaslfjas;FJSD:FJ This makes me feel bad (in a very silly way) because I was going to a party on Saturday and my beta was like "Are you going to publish the last chapter before or after the party?" and I was like hmmm well I wanna do my eyeliner before I go, so I'll post after, it will be fine! .....I didn't realize people were WAITING or I would have posted BEFORE AKDS:FJ:SDKFJ:SF 🤣)

    🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 You are so sweet holy cow 😭😭😭 This is SUCH a kind comment 😭😭 Thank you so much for reccing this fic to your friends!!! That makes me so happy to hear!!!
    I've mentioned in replies to other comments, but I always just want to give an extra thank you for people who compliment my writing as being engaging. I think out of all things in my writing, "entertaining" is the thing I strive to accomplish the most. I LOVE hearing when people are able to lose themselves in my writing. To me, that's one of the biggest possible compliment 😭

    FSDFKJ Thank you for the compliment on my prose. I actually had to sit here and make myself take that compliment-- I personally feel like my prose is one area where I'm often not as strong-- not that it's BAD at all, just that I feel like things like dialogue far outshine the descriptions and such. But you know, I think with a longform story, having light, non-distracting prose is probably helpful. I often look at shortform writing with the GORGEOUS writing styles where reading the writing is even more of a treat than reading the story and I'm like "WOW that is some gorgeous prose." But sometimes the job of the words and sentences isn't to be gorgeous, but to be easy to engage with. And you know? I DO think I accomplish that, and that's such a good reminder to have. My writing philosophy has always been "There's not a 'right' or 'wrong', there's just effective or ineffective." and I think you're right that the prose fits this story and I can be proud of that 💪😂

    Thank you for such an amazingly thoughtful comment 😭 It made me feel very warm and fuzzy and stroked my writer ego 😎😎 I feel very proud to have created something that someone enjoyed so much ☺️

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    1. callthemstarchild on Chapter 6 Wed 20 Mar 2024 05:41AM UTC

      ofc king hope u had a lovely time at the party dont sweat the waiting it just made the chapter all the more worth it i hope u enjoyed urself u deserve it sm bro after this behemoth of art you created LOL (also the eyeliner thing is too real ill be like running 10 minutes late and still insist on eyeliner)

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