Thankyou for your comment! It honestly feels so nice when someone leaves such a detailed comment :)
I agree about the battle, it was well written but I would have loved some more "actual" fight, if that makes sense.
And that moment with the killing curse just came so naturally to me while writing, I knew it couldn't have happened any other way, I am glad you share the same view
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