Comment on you might be what i want, but you’re not what i need

  1. krystalpomme on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 08:09PM UTC

    you’re wrong about a lot of things, so i would recommend re-reading the chapter before leaving these kinds of comments. 1) in the beginning of the story, pepper introduced peter as HER child as well. 2) this was not based on me or my life at all, and it’s a bit weird to make those assumptions in the first place. 3) the ending is a callback to the beginning of the story, it implies they’re all going on a family vacation WITHOUT peppers parents being involved. 4) they’re not divided. if i was a parent and my mother was saying horrible things to my adopted child, i wouldn’t want her near any of my kids. yeah, peppers upset that maybe morgan and pete don’t get grandparents, but i think she’s more happy that they’re away from that environment. 5) peter didn’t tell tony anything, that was one of the main points in the whole story. what was he supposed to do?

    lastly, you can say you didn’t enjoy the ending without insulting the author in the process. i was struggling with this one, i acknowledged that in the end notes, and you still chose to make the decision to comment something rude. if this is how you give constructive criticism, i would rethink your approach. not only have you offended me, but you’ve probably made others insecure to put out their own work because of this response. i would like all my readers to be respectful not only to me and my work, but to other readers as well. if you can’t be decent, then i would not like to have you as a reader on my page. there are other works you can read on this platform and i would be happy to recommend some.

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      1. krystalpomme on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 08:17PM UTC

        but you didn’t say that you didn’t like it. you said it was stupid 😵💫 and please stop assuming things about my feelings, personal life, and whatnot. you could’ve apologized and moved on, but it’s clear you’re just a rude person who doesn’t know when to stop. i would appreciate it if you would leave my page <3

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          1. krystalpomme on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 08:21PM UTC

            that was a different story babe. goodbye 😋

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              1. rachel (Guest) on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 10:10PM UTC

                Get help.

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          3. Chadrien_Maribug15 on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 10:31PM UTC

            Well. I was mistaken. Not a civil debate at all. The way you just trash others- it makes me more angry than ooc pepper because at least she’s a fictional jerk, you’re just a mean person irl.

            There is such an astounding difference from constructive criticism and pure hate. What you have done definitely falls into the latter category.

            I will repeat what Rachel stated. Get help.

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