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  1. y0innkk on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 08:03PM UTC

    Bruh 😭😭 I can’t deal with this today-

    I’m not sure if I have to spell it out for you but nothing in that response made sense

    CLEARLY the author wrote this

    You insulting the writing is INSULTING THE AUTHOR

    BECAUSE THE AUTHOR

    W R O T E. T H E. STORY.

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    1. Lexi (Guest) on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 08:06PM UTC

      Again nowhere is that offending the author. I personally don’t know how to spell it out for u. But your writing takes u where it takes u like I said. You have no control over how it really ends you write what u feel. Good and bad emotions so yes it ended stupidly because of the divide between the Stark Family. Is the author apart of a fictional family? Cause last I checked no. The Starks are stupid and it ended stupidly because no one actual expressed their actual true feelings.

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      1. Account Deleted on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 09:29PM UTC

        hey, fellow writer here! you're allowed your own opinions on storytelling of course, i personally don't like avengers endgame, but i wouldn't walk up to the russo brothers and say right in their face that their work was stupid now, would i? so, let's go through this logically, shall we?

        1. if someone says that you're offending them, then you are. and considering myself, and a couple other people in this thread are mutuals with the author, don't pull any HoW dO yOu KnOw bullshit on me.

        2. are you apart of this fictional family? yeah, didn't think so.

        3. you have to remember, fanfic is completely deviant from canon sources; with it we can tell other storylines that wouldn't appear on big screens

        4. have you ever gone outside? go on, go outside. breathe some oxygen, touch some grass. lots of conflicts don't get solved in the real world, especially family ones where there are 1 or more people caught in the crossfire. ive lost family and friends to this sort of thing, it's not that simple (also, sidenote; the character the author is using, Tom Holland's Peter Parker, is noted for displaying symptoms of neurodiversity. i cant speak for the author, but as someone who is autistic, i can say its hard to express your feelings in an argument like this)

        5. besides, it's actually good storytelling. an ending that isn't sunshine and rainbows diverts expectations, leaving the reader more intrigued. it echoes real life, as i mentioned previously, meaning some audience members can resonate and relate to these characters a lot more, and it makes you sympathise with peter, tony and other characters too. this is actually textbook good writing.

        6. and of course, i don't have to mention that fanfiction is free. completely and utterly free to you, the reader. doing shit like this takes time and effort and has fucked with a lot of my friends heads. writing a well planned, well executed story like this takes months, hell, im writing a one shot and its taken almost half a year. please remember we have actual lives outside of this fandom and take this into consideration next time you leave a comment.

        7. how hard is it to leave a nice comment? the author didn't ask for constructive criticism, and even if they did, you word it better, you be professional about it. cause to me, this seems like less of a reflection on the writers work, and more daddy didn't give you enough attention growing up and now you like to be an awful human to others.

        so, as a reflection, SHUT THE FUCK UP AND GET THE FUCK OUT OF THIS COMMENT SECTION. WE DONT WANT YOU HERE.

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        1. Lexi (Guest) on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 09:40PM UTC

          Then maybe stop commenting back to me. You’re the one who keeps adding me back into it. And lol maybe so I mean maybe so. I come from two lesbian moms so 🤷♀️. And who said the story wasn’t good storytelling. So once again what are you arguing about?

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          1. Account Deleted on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 09:59PM UTC

            here, hold on, i need to break out my GCSE writing scheme, okay:

            throughout their entire transparent argument, the writer has shown deep idiocy for all social courtesy in the writing community. Their use of the phrase "stop commenting back to me" implies that the defendant had replied more than once, which is clearly stupid and makes one question whether they should go back to set eight maths. This idea is supported by they use of a question in the rhetoric variety; "who said the story wasn't good storytelling?" when they were the one who literally called the ending "stupid".
            As a queer person, the defendant kindly asks for the accusor to not bring up their lesbian moms who no one gives two flying fucks about (seriously, any askers?) as it has no relevance to the argument, and further enunciates that the point im trying to make is that you should fuck off, wanker.

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            1. Lexi (Guest) on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Oct 2021 10:03PM UTC

              As you once again bring me back into the thread after the writer asked not to lol. But bravo on the dedication that took 😂😂. Also you’re the one who brought up my moms not me. Maybe don’t assume someone’s family relationship that was a mistake on your part. And really a funny one considering what the actual story is about. You being queer brings no relevance to this in the same way my lesbian moms don’t so maybe take your own advice on that? Also as long as someone comments to me I’m going to comment back keep them coming 🤷♀️😂😂

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