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  1. dapnhedumaurier Wed 25 Mar 2026 12:04PM UTC

    OMG!! Thank you so much for your beautiful and detailed comment!! Your words felt like a hug, it honestly made me so happy to see how much you enjoyed it 💖

    Truth to be told, writing the ex and making him act like that was painful… but at the same time, the tension with Abbott in that whole situation? Way too much fun to write. 🤭

    And the rooftop conversation it's my favorite part by far. They’re just two idiots who think they’re not enough for each other, and it hurts because it’s so obvious they care so much 😢❤️ They’re so inevitably drawn to each other, but at the same time they’re terrified of getting it wrong and losing everything.

    And Abbott getting Reader's number through the emergency contact excuse? That just feels exactly like something he would do, completely shameless about it.

    I swear keep replaying certain scenes and moments over and over in my head too. Jack Abbott has me completely under his control at this point.

    More is coming soon, and I really hope to see you in the next part 💕

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