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  1. tututueva Mon 23 Mar 2026 08:17PM UTC

    OH MY GOODNESS, BLESS YOU AND YOUR HANDS FOR TYPING THIS MASTERPIECE!
    Agh, I couldn't comment the moment I read it and I'm hating myself for that😋​

    First of all.... ABBOTTTTTTTTTTTT ​❤️‍🔥​ Of course Reader is blushing if you are reminding her of your delicious and well-rested nap! I CAN'T with this maaaaannnnnnn, I'm blushing like crazy! He's so flirty that he'll make me have a heart attack at some point ffs

    Ugh, the ex gives me the ick, just pathetic🙄​ I'm freaking proud of Reader not steping back and claiming her boundaries as her doctor👏​👏​ And, damn, Abbot was TENSE, I think one more minute listening to her ex's bullshit and he would have gone straight for the jugular

    Their talk at the roof??????? HELLO??????? More direct and they should have written "I fucking love you so much" on their foreheads. COME ON GUYS, it's thereeeeeeeee🤭​🤭​🤭

    Jack, darling, you can't save your number on Reader's phone and just claiming it to be for the "emergency contact", we both know it was your subtle way of giving your number to her, you dog😏​
    AND THEN they start flirting through messages, I CAN'TTTTTTTTTTT​😍​🥵​❤️‍🔥​

    "And for the record... I miss you too" JAAAAAAAAAAACKKKKKKKK💥​👁️​👄​👁️​💥​ I've been thinking about this phrase over and over again for hours now, I'm going to get it tattooed in the end​🥵​🥵​

    Anyway, apart from my descent to insanity because of Jack Abbot, I can't wait to read the next chapters💖​

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    1. dapnhedumaurier Wed 25 Mar 2026 12:04PM UTC

      OMG!! Thank you so much for your beautiful and detailed comment!! Your words felt like a hug, it honestly made me so happy to see how much you enjoyed it 💖

      Truth to be told, writing the ex and making him act like that was painful… but at the same time, the tension with Abbott in that whole situation? Way too much fun to write. 🤭

      And the rooftop conversation it's my favorite part by far. They’re just two idiots who think they’re not enough for each other, and it hurts because it’s so obvious they care so much 😢❤️ They’re so inevitably drawn to each other, but at the same time they’re terrified of getting it wrong and losing everything.

      And Abbott getting Reader's number through the emergency contact excuse? That just feels exactly like something he would do, completely shameless about it.

      I swear keep replaying certain scenes and moments over and over in my head too. Jack Abbott has me completely under his control at this point.

      More is coming soon, and I really hope to see you in the next part 💕

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