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“We have orders to extract you and Argentum from the area.”
“What?” The question is more reflex than anything, and Prompto looks to Noctis for some kind of indication about just how bad this ranks on the royal shit scale and why he is suddenly involved, but Noctis isn’t looking at him.
Noctis has gone very still, except for his eyes. He’s scanning the café like he expects to find something there. None of the Crownsguard respond to Prompto at all.
“Where’s the car parked?” Noctis asks, and the tension in his voice is enough for the first trickle of fear to work its way through Prompto’s stomach.
Oh, fuck. This is bad. This is so bad.
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- Part 2 of Emergency Protocols
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I love how you write Prompto (and his catalogue of Ignis' faces), but I'm especially impressed by the way you write action! The tension of them appearing, the twist as Prompto realises they're not real Crownsguard, his internal debate and throwing himself off the escalator, Noct fighting and Prompto running to cut off the new enemies - so much drama and new ways to keep up the momentum and excitement.