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  1. itty bitty

    Oooooughghghhhhh. This is such a beautiful ending for her. And such a great showing of Loop’s pov throughout act 5 and 6.

    This whole fic is a great look at their perspective throughout the story, and man, is it harrowing. It brings back what makes them so AAAAAAAAAAAA as a character in the first place- its so tragic!!! But they stay silly! And kind!!! So kind and willing to help when nobody could’ve blamed them for lashing out!!! Aaaaaaaaa.

    And then what happened after they disappeared. Oughjghghhhhh. Getting to speak woth the party one last time- or maybe not one last time, but the last time as Loop. As Siffrin.

    And the hollow chest comes back for one last huzzah! To get that star outta there!!! The body horror is deliciously grotesque as always.

    Never let it be said that Siffrin and Loop(now Gemini) aren’t the Universe’s favorites.

    Incredible fic! Awawawawawawawa. And i know that she’s going to go catch up with the party but honestly she deserves to sleep for a week first.

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    1. "we stay silly" - repeated by loop in increasing distress over the course of the fic

      THEY TALK WITH THE PARTY (?) ONE LAST TIME!!!!!!!! ive mentioned this before, but I have no official thoughts over whether this is the party, loopert hallucination, or Universe speaking to them - all that matters is it's a bit of closure for them (the closure they never got to have)

      YAYYYY NOTICING MY HEART METAPHORS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE FULL CIRCLE STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM SO NORMAL!!!!!!!!!!!! BODY HORROR IS AWESOME <3

      every flavor of Siffrin IS the universe's favorite. you understand. gemini probably will sleep for a week first tbh because of all the goddamn wish craft going on there. and she DOES deserve it you are so right. i love her and i wanted to give her a happy ending <3

      thank u for being Normal TM about my fic auto!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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