Hey thank I just wrote this down on like 30 mins of sleep and I know that it was a little not ideal but I was going for some humor. I’m definitely going to add some red hood interaction next chapter. Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I hope you have an awesome day and feel free to leave more feedback anytime. I’d you have any idea where I should take this fic please let me know. I have no idea what to do.
English isn’t my first language. By ‘not ideal,’ I meant it wasn’t good from Nightwing’s perspective — being mistaken for a pedophile at the first meeting isn’t exactly great. I liked the humor though; I think it’s a nice touch and feels realistic. From Peter’s side, he honestly doesn’t know what’s happening, and you show that well. I’m not very good at writing, but I think from here on Peter will focus more on where he is and what has happened to him. In these kinds of stories, we almost never see Peter actively trying to get home, so it would be really nice to see that.
I hope you’re getting some sleep now 😴 Good ideas usually start coming when you sleep.
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