I just finished all three chapters so forgive me for only commenting on this one! This is so SO good. I love how you have captured the vibe of the show and all the characters. I was so happy to find an ot3 pairing and the hint of Jug/Archie just adds to it. It's the fic of my Rivedale dreams tbh. Ugh so good.
"In this moment, she could tell the blonde anything, all her secrets, lets her feel like she could even ask Betty for things (but what can you give someone who already has everything? And then lost it all?), but the bell dings, and it’s Archie and someone she finds out is Jughead. A pair, if you ever saw one: she doesn’t know why they don’t hang out more often. With all four of them in the booth, the seats are warm and cozy, and everything feels like it’s slotting into place. The night stretches on."
This line is FAB. It sums up the feeling of these four and esp Veronica so well. I can't get over it. Lovelyyy.
thank you so much?? for your love?? and especially quoting that?? I'm so so glad to be able to capture the essence of the core four because that's what I've been going for and YES I've always felt that never mentioning jug/archie would make everything seem off-balance. Dreadfully sorry that the next update is taking ages (it's going past 3k words now oh no) because I wanted to pin down the B/E vibes that even the narrator canonically mentioned as being forged so finally.
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