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  1. Whentheimposters on Chapter 1 Mon 05 May 2025 04:52PM UTC

    i ADORE your writing style!! the tone is so, so heavy. the way you illustrate the characters and never the background it feels intentional and just. without establishing where they are it feels so, isolating. also the intro?? about blue, then "across his wings, down his chassis.." part. also playing with long short medium sentence length- i was gonna be reading FIRE from then on🙏‼️ i gotta study ur writing omg. kjdos :D

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    1. AshesToAshes96 on Chapter 1 Tue 29 Jul 2025 01:02AM UTC

      Oh my goodness! Apologies for the late response, but your comment is so kind! Thank you very much and I hope you continue to enjoy it!! <3

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