Comment on How My Lord Aches (For The Flower)

  1. chicktresmee Wed 23 Apr 2025 09:38PM UTC

    okay the first para of the description of ghost city is so so good?? like i haven't read many fics where they describe ghost city like this but yours truly do match the description of the book ghost city wow

    ugh i love how you have written hua cheng's entrance! so intimidating and scaryyy, even if the atmosphere was so light previously! like the moment he appeared, it became tense! i swear i love how you write him a lot.

    [“Too much, too much, too much!” Xie Lian yelped, his face burning so hot that it felt as though it might catch fire. He slammed the book shut with both hands, the force of it rattling the table beneath him.] he's so cute lmaooo

    [“Do you…” His voice was barely above a whisper. “Do you want me to help you relax?”] the way i screeched omg! getting bold are weee, we love to see it!

    [“…Besides… I do know how to swallow swords. So… that should help too…?”] xie lian, if your goal is to break your husband, you're succeeding baby 😭

    [Then, as if confirming something to himself, he sealed his lips tighter and sucked—softly, tentatively, like testing the rim of a delicate wine cup to see if it would spill.] the fucking vision of this... hua cheng is your god's strongest soldier, if that was me i would have dispersed for the second time omg

    [With a harsh, guttural groan, he wrenched himself free at the last second, spilling hard across Xie Lian’s face with a raw, broken curse. Thick, hot ropes painted his cheek, his jaw, the curve of his mouth—white streaks catching in the dip of his cupid’s bow and dripping from his chin. Some clung to his lashes like dew.] i am fuckinggg DECEASED. this sight is more erotic than xie lian swallowing 😭😭 hua cheng don't tease me with your wife's cum soaked face grrr

    oh lawrddd, the reverse gege kink 😫😫😖 absolutely love how it makes hua cheng a feralll dog

    [Hua Cheng only laughed—low, rich, maddeningly fond. His hand reached out to slip around Xie Lian’s jaw, fingers gentle but insistent as he coaxed him to face him again. “I’m just teasing, Gege” he smiled, and pressed a kiss to his flushed cheek—soft and entirely too pleased.] the domestic-ness of this... my chest hurts.. hualian my beloveds 😭

    [And then, slowly, he smiled. It bloomed across his face like something delicate and blooming in spring, soft and unbearably sweet. “I really did enjoy it, San Lang.”] ughh he has no right to say he enjoyed giving a bj with that sweet smile on that pretty little face. he's killing me here

    okayyy, you have done it again author. thank you for this masterpiece! there are not many fics where xl is the one giving a blowjob to hc, and you have written xie lian doing that as his first time so well!! 💞 thank youu

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    1. xuanlake Fri 02 May 2025 04:17PM UTC

      saw the lack of hua cheng getting his cock sucked so i took matters to my own hands!! im glad my work satisfied you once again!! thank u sm for ur comment i appreciate it so so muchh🥺❤️❤️❤️

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