I like a lot of what you're doing. Two things are not clear though. Is Penny 14 when she meets Tony at the store, or was she just remembering when she was 14 and got to start working there. You mention towards the end that she'd be working on her web forumula for a few years, and only just had made her costume/suit a bit before. The other part that isn't clear is was she Penny Parker, but not in the universe of super-heroes in her prior life?
Seperatly, was there a Spider-woman comic or a Spider-man comic in her original life? In real life I knew someone who had been born with the name of Peter Parker from Brooklyn - and was a woman who needed to have corrective surgery and hormones to present as female. She changed her name as soon as possible.
Penny is 14, I mention in this chapter that she got this job as soon as she turned 14 and that she'd only been working here a few months. Web formula was made pre-spiderwomaning which will get expanded in future chapters, she got spiderwomaned only 1.5months ago. I don't really think that last part needs to be clarified due to being in this chapter and will be in the next, as said she was reborn as a comic book character, so Penny is Peter Parker and yes, normal MCU rules. Random person from our universe to the MCU
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