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  1. copper_dust Wed 18 Dec 2024 01:25AM UTC

    Thanks for the comment! I rewrote that sentence so many times, trying to get the right rhythm. I knew the meaning of what I wanted to say, but it was all about finding the exact combination of words. I'm still not 100% happy with it because I think it's a little clunky.

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    1. havesomefire Sun 05 Jan 2025 09:31PM UTC

      It comes across so beautifully. The entire work is a labour of love, and you have such a beautiful way with your writing.

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      1. copper_dust Tue 14 Jan 2025 12:35PM UTC

        Thank you so much!

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