Comment on The Dragon-King's Temple

  1. Fosterchild4 on Chapter 1 Fri 13 Dec 2024 07:46PM UTC

    Congratulations are in order.
    1- I came into this with exactly zero knowledge of one of the fandoms (Stargate) and I’m not lost or confused. While unfamiliar, the setting, conflict, and characters make sense.
    2- Using the Avatar world as another planet is something I’ve wanted to see for years. Thank you.
    3- I love the way you’ve portrayed Toph and Zuko in this setting. Language was nicely done. I especially like the phonetic English. Characterization is spot on “If you want comfort, ask Katara”. And you can clearly see the difference between Toph being a fighter and Zuko being a soldier. All excellent. 👌
    4- I like all the structural details. Toph complaining about the depth of the floor, Zuko sensing wires, Toph being accustomed to shorter allies. So many little things that bring you THERE.
    I love it! Thank you for writing this!

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