This was so silly and whimsical and fun. You did an excellent job setting up Draco’s reactions to the war and the past. A great section:
Draco feels like one large human vulnerability. He’s sixteen, and the entire weight of his family rests on his shoulders. The entire weight of the Manor. The entire weight of the world.
I loved that Draco takes his job so seriously and is so intent about doing it well and being kind. A competent, reformed, pining Draco is one of my favorite Draco’s!
The focus on maintaining secrecy at all costs during training was uncomfortably close to the views of the Dark Lord. Care might not be the first priority of the Obliviators at large, but it is Draco’s first priority.
The snake puns were a delight and Harry’s ridiculousness in trying to get Draco into bed.
“So you… don’t want to see my snake up close?” The sound that comes out of Draco is half-outrage, half-demand.
“Are you talking about your dick?”
“Yeah. If you’re into that.”
“I’ll show you what I’m into,” Draco says darkly. “Now show me inside.”
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