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  1. Account Deleted Fri 18 Oct 2024 10:33PM UTC

    Dear DemonSlayer4life(Dai_suke),

    Thank you so much for publishing this story here! Seriously, you've made my entire day!

    Aww, this little short story is so adorable! It's just too cute for it not to have a part two! Leave it to Fuyumi for always being the considerate one in the family! I really do hope they get to have a date, but let's pray that Endeavor doesn't track or go through Fuyumi's phone...I love how summertime means it's sundress season, and I bet our homeboy Hawks wants to see Fuyumi in a pretty little sundress for their pretty little summertime date!

    If Endeavor saw Hawks planting a kiss on his little girl's cheek, it would be the end for Hawks...Luckily, they were not seen! I find it cute how Hawks loves eating fried chicken so much! My favorite fried chicken place is Dave's Hot Chicken and if I were Fuyumi, I'd want for us to go there because their chicken sliders are the best! I do not care for their fries but they're nice too!

    Well, please do keep up the fabulous work! I can't wait to read more stories from you! Have a wonderful day/afternoon/evening/night whenever and wherever you are reading this comment!

    With Kindest Regards,

    hilsahime

    Last Edited Fri 18 Oct 2024 10:33PM UTC

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    1. Dai_Chan (Dai_suke) Fri 18 Oct 2024 11:26PM UTC

      Thank you for the nice comment 😄, but honestly i wrote this when i was 13 and now im just getting flash backs to how cringy this sounds compared to the ither fanfics out😭 im surprised you liked it enough to write a long comment. I do appreciate it though. Ive hoped to write more stories but high schools kicking my ads rn😢 Still thank you very much, have a wonderful day/afternoon/ night as well

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      1. Account Deleted Sat 19 Oct 2024 12:41AM UTC

        You're so welcome, my good friend! I really mean it when I say that I enjoyed this story very much! LOL, I was writing MHA/BNHA fanfiction when I was 15/16 and I had that phase so I too am guilty of writing cringey fanfiction but that being said, one man’s trash is another man’s treasure so just because you're ashamed of your writing, that doesn't necessarily mean everyone else will think poorly of it! Sometimes, other people see the beauty in our stories that we don't! I'm going to be 19 this October 29 and university has kept me busy so I'm not writing as much as I do over the summer! Summer break is when I pull out with the content! Well, thank you so much for replying back to me! I really love hearing back from authors! Until next time, I can't wait to read more of your Hawks/Fuyumi stories! <3

        Last Edited Sat 19 Oct 2024 12:42AM UTC

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        1. Dai_Chan (Dai_suke) Sat 19 Oct 2024 02:27AM UTC

          You should write so huwumi stuff too, I would love to see what you come up with ! I already turned 15 back in May, but if I have to time and energy I’ll write another chapter

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          1. Account Deleted Sat 19 Oct 2024 04:39AM UTC

            You know what? Maybe I should write about them! I love Huwumi in AUs more than the canon setting so there’s that! My younger brother turned 15 in May too! That being said, if you do choose to write a second chapter, please do let me know as I’d love to be the first reader! <3 Please do take good care of yourself, stay safe, and have lots of fun! <3

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