Well, you certainly have a much better grasp what is going on than I might have, so yes, if he gets nicely secured in the hospital, no running and sneaking around for him. Not that I believed much in the success, sometimes it is simply a matter of keeping making rash decision out of desperation. And to annoy adults into making mistakes.
Council being "stupid" (from an annoyed reader's point of view) and maybe even nothing changing because of "traditions" and "lack of proof" + maybe no testimony because Obi-Wan is so far into the masking of abuse and not telling truth that he is "simply fine and Jinn is a good and gracious master who took him in when no one wanted to"? I can see that. It might break my heart but still, angsty no comfort ending is some sort of ending... Heartbreaking angst says that Force Ghost Jinn is accusing Kenobi of not doing enough to pave Skywalker his path to greatness and fulfilling prophecy? Completely not a "fix-it and comfort Obi" story.
I don't really read to get a specific kind of ending, so I will look forward to the unknown being unfolded.
I can understand that. Scenarios that make me sad or angry call for either fluff or fix-it to balance out. It might be masochistic a bit but this sad scenario could still be really good to read, just for a different mood, so in a way I would read both versions... I know it doesn't exactly help but - you could always try writing both to explore how it would turn out? My apologies for possibly tangling things up. I like to poke at the topic, but derailing someone's creative process is not the aim.
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