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1. giraffewrites Mon 14 Nov 2016 08:42AM UTC

   

   Dude this is awesome! Really well written! The only constructive criticism I have is that you may want to split it into paragraphs so it's stucture is more accurate. I really like this though, so please don't take my suggestion badly!!

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2. 1. H0rr0rBus1n3ss Mon 14 Nov 2016 01:07PM UTC

      

      Thank you so much, I'll be sure to split it next time!

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   2. 1. giraffewrites Mon 14 Nov 2016 03:14PM UTC

         

         No worries dude! I look forward to your next work!

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