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  1. Irrisorie on Chapter 1 Fri 28 Jun 2024 04:52PM UTC

    Neville's Boggart - Severus Snape using Dowager Long bottom's clothes

    Hi! Brazilian here! I have a few grammar corrections for you.

    "Empurrar,” he commanded. (Push!) “Empurrar! Novamente, empurre!” (Push..again, push!)
    ^ All the empurrar have to be corrected to "Empurre" since it's a command/ order. Empurrar is the infinitive version of this verb while Empurre is another verb tense that is only specifically used to order something from someone.

    And here you missed an accent ( Is that the correct word for it? I forgot. Here we call that time of word mark/ signal " acento" which can be funny for foreigners because assento is like chairs, seats, couches ( anything that you can sit on) but it's mostly used for seats at transportations like buses, trains and planes.

    "Onde voce esteve?" the woman wailed angrily.

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    1. StayGolden1 on Chapter 1 Fri 28 Jun 2024 06:13PM UTC

      So cool, you're from Brazil?? That is so awesome. Thanks for the corrections, I went back and made the adjustments. I hope the accent is in the right place? I'm not entirely sure, lol.

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      1. Irrisorie on Chapter 1 Fri 28 Jun 2024 06:22PM UTC

        Neville's Boggart - Severus Snape using Dowager Long bottom's clothes

        Onde você esteve?" the woman wailed angrily. -> yep! This is correct now.

        Yes I am. I'm also a med student so if you got any questions related to that you can ask me lol. Not sure I will be able to answer all questions but some I can already even if I only completed one third of the degree already.

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        1. StayGolden1 on Chapter 1 Fri 28 Jun 2024 06:34PM UTC

          Awesome. I just might ask you for a couple pointers in the near future, since people are sure to get injured later on, haha. And best of luck with your studying, you guys are so needed. Thanks again!

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