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  1. Damascus_ari on Chapter 1 Sun 02 Jun 2024 08:32PM UTC

    I keep coming back here. I love the idea. The setting is so incredibly inspiring, provoking so many thoughts as to what is happening and why.

    I'm going to say I do find some of the wording a bit off, but the content is just so delicious.

    Also, I wanted to comment again, because I want to underscore how much I like this and thank you.

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    1. Talia_Black on Chapter 1 Sun 02 Jun 2024 08:37PM UTC

      Aww, thank you <3

      And I definitely agree with you when it comes to the wording. I was much less experienced when it came to editing, mainly because when I did finally finish something I was so eager to just be done with it I wouldn't take the time to edit it. So I will probably come back through at some point and rework a lot of lines, especially some of Aaravos' and a bit of Callum's inner monologue at the beginning of chapter 3.

      I am not a very consistent writer (as evident by my profile) so I don't yet have the talent to write what I envision in my head. I'm very happy to see people still enjoy this though.

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      1. Damascus_ari on Chapter 1 Sun 02 Jun 2024 11:02PM UTC

        Oh, yeah, I can really sympathise with wanting to move on from something.

        Regardless of your supposed skill or how edited this is, there is something to your writing (at least in this one fandom I know) that scratches an itch just right.

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