Comment on A foolish heart

  1. ElReyCiervo on Chapter 1 Tue 19 Mar 2024 03:20AM UTC

    Oh man, the lead up to the explosive parts where Sigurd punches Eivor is so well done. And I think you did a great job showing their emotions. When Eivor realizes she's been punched by her brother, the person who said he'll protect her, she feels hurt and betrayal (along with Sigurd feeling immediate regret and disbelief at himself) was very well done.

    Damn, even Dag was going to come to her aid. That's really saying something.

    Thanks for sharing this!
    ElReyCiervo

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    1. Inkognito97 on Chapter 1 Wed 20 Mar 2024 04:38PM UTC

      Oh, thank you very much! I really appreciate your words, especially since English isn't my native language.

      Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment. It means a lot and you really made my day! ^^

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