FAVGEDJUSAEH This is absolutely amazing! It’s been a great read since chapter 1, and this is just an absolutely amazing ending. Everything’s given enough time to breathe, say for example the scare surrounding Scar almost dying, that it really just sits with you but still keeps pace to keep the scene feeling alive. This is an absolutely stunning piece of writing.
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU EEEEEEE Ending things is always a little bittersweet and comes with the worry that maybe it doesn't do the rest of the story justice, so I'm so happy to hear that people enjoyed the ending, ESPECIALLY people who have been here from the beginning! I'm SO flattered you think the pacing is well done!! That's definitely a BIG thing and something that I think can make or break a story so I'm beyond happy that it landed well! 😊
You're so so so sweet, thank you so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!!!
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