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  1. Hehehe I love the word count! This chapter was absolutely fantastic, such an amazing closer to a wonderful fic ❤️ everything about this story was so detailed and passionate ❤️ the action scenes were so tense! And I really loved mumbo being the driver hahaha it really tickled me, a little lightheartedness to break up the intense drama! This was so beautifully written and so enjoyable to read ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ HEHEHE THANK YOUUUUU 💕💕💕 I definitely struggled with writing the action scenes so I'm very happy to hear they were effectively tense >:D
      Mumbo can be the comic relief, as a treat 😂
      Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!

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