The way I ran to read this story as soon as I saw your reply on your other story. Like I immediately opened my web browser and stopped everything I was doing to read this because I hadn’t realized it’d been published already.
V (01_01), love of my life, favorite author, the hand that feeds me, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS STORY OMG. I was a bit skeptical about Rika but she made it so much better???? Like Yuta + Rika=unbeatable duo. I was squealing and shaking throughout this entire thing because the dynamic between the three of them just works so well. Also, THE SMUT WAS AMAZING!! Yuta coming in Yujis mouth while Rika pegged him was so hot. And Yuta taking Yujis virginity was so perfect. Yuji having squeezable pecs is so canon. He’s always been kind of beefy so that was such a perfect touch. i know Yujis pecs and ass are probably Rika and Yuta’s favorite body parts lol. I was reading the entire thing with my jaw dropped because it was such a great scene. Threesomes are tricky to write and you somehow did it wonderfully.
Gojo is toxic (everyone in this story technically is but he takes it to new levels lol) to the max and it surprises me Yuji hasn’t realized that yet. I know he’s a bit naive but wow talk about ignoring red flags. But that kind of just makes it better when Gojo doesn’t get his way lol. Like I know he was fuming when he learned Yuji would be spending the night somewhere else again while he had to smile like 🤠 and spend a night alone with Yujis mom playing the nice husband.
I love your version of Yuta, like you can tell he’s toxic and creepy but because of the way he acts it just works?? I’m not sure what witchcraft you’ve performed but Yuta can do no wrong in my eyes. AND PLEASE THE SMUT. When he was talking about how he understands Gojo now and how he’s a traitor. LIKE YES, YUJI IS THAT GUY. He can pull anyone and make them betray anyone for a chance with him. Yuta is too funny, the way he knows that Gojo would kill him if he finds out about them and makes Yuji swear not to tell him. Yujis probably like “ofc I’m not gonna tell him, he may think it’s weird since we’ll be related!” Meanwhile Yuta is worried because “he’s gonna chop me up and dispose of my body parts” and Gojos a doctor so, he probably knows how to do it too, and Yuta knows that LOL. Yuta risking his life for a chance with Yuji and I don’t blame him at all. The way you write Yuta is just *perfect* and he’s so hot I could cry.
Rika in this story was so good. She gives me mommy dom vibes, and as soon as u described her mom I was like “yup, figured it’d run in the family” The pegging? Amazing! The banter with Yuta/them arguing over Yuji? Top tier! Her just watched Yuji get his back blown out? Impeccable!
There’s just so much to love about this story, and the series overall and it’s so hard to condense it into one comment so just know I loved everything about this fic. The OkkoIta agenda thanks you 🫡
Question though, have Yuta and Rika never had sex? I had always thought they have had sex but With the whole comment about Yuta never undressing in front of Rika when they were going into the jacuzzi, I’m assuming they haven’t?
Final question, is this kind of like an alternate path, because in the main story Yuji is dating Megumi and I’m assuming the things that transpired in this story didn’t happen in the main one (sorry if that sounds confusing sksksk). So is this story kind of like just showing what would've happen if Yuji agreed to their proposal sooner? Or is this part of the main timeline?
Sorry this comment was messy and my thoughts were everywhere, this fic was so good it scrambled my mind and grammar. Thanks so much for the amazing writing once again. I loved this one shot and was so happy to see more of Yuta. (Your nickname for me is pretty accurate since I’m literally obsessed with him lol)
Omgg I wasn't expecting such an ethusiastic response😳😳 This dynamic is very specific and definitely not everyone's cup of tea so I'm very happy that you liked it💗
It was funny to me when Yuta came in Yuji's mouth actually cause previously he said that he won't come in cause he's gonna get a stomach ache but Yuji obviously had to swallow if it was in his mouth and with cum IN his stomach, he's 100% gonna get a stomach ache. But you know what? Worth it. Yuji wouldn't complain and so wouldn't I. What I also thought about is that Rika wanted to watch Yuta fuck Yuji cause it was her dream to do it herself but she has no d so.. she's living the dream through Yuta basically🤣 they're hot together anyway so she's not even jealous. Rika would be thriving as a guy. Oooh or a trans girl! That would be cool too. Pegging is alright but how much better would it be if she could feel Yuji?👀
I can't decide what's best about Yuji -pecks, thighs, ass? Beefy ukes are the best cause they're so squishable🤏 Yuji is just perfect. I could write an essey on this topic.
Honey said Yuji is giving bimbo vibes in this fic and what you said about ignoring red flags reminded me of it hahah. I just wanted to make Gojo creepier without the consequences hahah. Funny thing is, I originally didn't plan to include him and I wanted to make it a little different that in the og fic but I wanted their specific dynamic so bad that I just rolled with it. I wouldn't be kidding anyone if I tried to sell it as a complitely seperate fic🤣 I also love when Gojo doesn't get what he wants. He's so pathetic
I think Yuta just has this charm canonically ghat a lot of other characters don't have. Even when he's creepy he's not creepy in the same way as the other guys. Like not in a gross way, at least that's what I think. Yuta is literally risking his life to get laid😭😭 THE DEDICATION!! But it's worth for Yuji. Everyone wants him but he chose Yuta. Go off king👏 Being a womanizer pays off sometimes. He knew how to rizz Yuji up when Gojo and others failed What also paid off was becoming a family cause now Yuji has a good reason not to tell Gojo anything compared to if Yuta asked him "just because". He'd probably be like "he should know. He's my father!!" etc Tho even if neither of them says anything Gojo would still figure it out somehow so.. R.I.P Yuta🥲 and you Rika, enjoy your vacation from Yuji. You ain't gon' see him again. That's the last Gojo would do if he can't treat her the same as Yuta lol
Rika would be even better as a curse tbh. I already said that but I love her cooperating with Yuta to concon Yuji (sorry if you're not into that😬)I just really like how strong she is tho in this fic it's only her character that's strong. This is also the only way I can imagine Yuji being with a woman haha he's a bottom no matter what.
I think in the og fic Rika once said that Yuta is good in bed -that she can assure him Yuta would be good to him, but here I changed it because.. idk I just felt like it😅 it doesn't work out between them cause she's not Yuta's type iykwim (he's gaaaay🏳️🌈) and Rika likes different boys too when it comes to choosing her sex partner. They're both tops. If they were to sleep with each other tho, Rika wouldn't peg Yuta (can't even imagine that😪). They would have regular straight sex.
Yes, exactly. It's what would've happened if he agreed😁. I wanted them to be the engame but couldn't so I birthed this instead..
Thank you for telling me your thoughts and I'm sorry for the late reply. I'm so so glad that you enjoyed!!!❤❤🐯
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