I’ve honestly been wanting to write something based on the Kittypet Sand AU. Fire-Sand is such a great match that really just gets glossed over in canon and there’s a lot of really interesting interactions that could happen between them, especially in this AU. This was fantastic and you did a good job ending on a cliffhanger without feeling like it was incomplete (though this would be a good prologue for a Kittypet Sand that really focuses on the events after Sandstorm’s arrival). Definitely a lot less first chapter style than Into the Blue was. This is certainly going to be the highlight of my morning.
Anyways, it’s refreshing to see something again and I’m excited to see what you’ve concocted for the arc rewrite of Spark of Thunderclan. Happy writing and hope you’re doing well!
I'm doing even better after reading your comment! :D
It's also great to see someone familiar with the AU here! Truthfully, some things in TSoT have been slightly inspired by some of mudcastle's AUs. I could probably make some other fics about their other stuff.
And yeah, I took the same approach to writing IoB's first chapter like how I would write a regular TSoT chapter. I'll write them more like this from now - skips and the like. It's just better.
The rewrite is actually progressing faster than I thought. I struggle to even call it a rewrite, really. I'm basically going back to polish each chapter and to change around a few key events and plot points. The core timeline has already been reworked - up to and after where I left off. Progress should flow steadily alongside IoB from now on.
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