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  1. DitaliniiPradainii on Chapter 4 Mon 22 Jan 2024 07:32AM UTC

    YOOO new chapter!! At first I totally get MC wanting to do things on their own (low-key can relate) but I'm like at least let hack help a little like damn😭😭

    And omggg, out of many fanfics I've read that the fandom has characterized Rory since almost nothing written about him yet, this is my favorite. He's not unnecessarily mean, just kinda..chilling and that's so sweet that he cares about Jack. Also them being best friends is about to be my new headcanon cause hell yeah. I also like how Rory already knows Jack likes MC (like he couldn't be more obvious)

    Plus, that little moment between MC and Jack just washing dishes is so cute to me. It's the little things that I love. ❤️

    (You're good on having no misspelling, you are killing it with this story as usual)

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    1. furorem_yandere on Chapter 4 Mon 22 Jan 2024 07:32PM UTC

      Thanks as always for your comment!! <333

      And yes lol reader is having a tough time... jack's just pushing a little too hard... she is like a feral cat. You must Pspspsps not reach your hand under the car or else you'll get scratched haha

      I'm glad you like Rory, I wasn't really sure what to do with him at first... ended up deciding on him being jack's pet introvert, with rory being the straight man to jack's optimism. And yes lol he already likes her, man has never been more obvious about anything else in his life 😂 we'll be seeing more of him for sure!

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