oh my gosh! this was so good! i love the twist on kate jumping out of the chopper. this description of her was perfect: "Kate shifts uncomfortably next to her, bouncing her leg impatiently. She looks like a child called down to the principal’s office. That’s always what she looks like." sooooo apt! and how when he kisses juliet, this line comes up (sooooo good!): "It feels like wearing glasses with the correct prescription for the first time." i loved that. i love that their love was able to blossom despite kate being there. despite james trying to keep the lie in-tact. hes so surprised by this newfound discovery but isnt pushing it away and that makes me so happy! well done friend!
ahhh thank you sweetpea!!! <3 the child in a principal's office was one of my favourite descriptors i've ever come up with for kate! that girl is trouble! i'm so so glad you liked this!!!! <3
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