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  1. softlygloss on Chapter 3 Fri 03 Nov 2023 05:45AM UTC

    Delightful!! What a plot twist, Will! You have such a lovely way of writing. I was shocked along with H when he figured out W was dreading something. What a wonderful way of describing the tiny signs: “A misplaced line at his mouth, something too fixed and unmoving about his brows, like a mask. A smear of stillness where there should be movement.”
    And realizing that this was W’s preferred way to die!! I’m torn between feeling sad and finding it exquisitely hot. I’m thrilled you updated early. Thanks for a great conclusion, you smashed it! <3

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    1. virtuous_contract on Chapter 3 Sun 05 Nov 2023 10:09PM UTC

      Chibi Cloud Strife

      Aahahhaaha I always aim for mixed feeling for my readers >:) >:) >:) >:) I'm just evil that way! So glad you liked this! Thank you for your patronage for my little sadist writer's soul. ;) <3

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