This is easily the best Lila Rossi downfall fic I've read. Obviously her demise in canon is very different and alludes to her being wayyyyy more sinister than she's portrayed here, but taking into consideration the time of publishing and the portrayal of her up until that point... this is good. It's *damn* good. You hit all of the social dynamic plot points that canon eventually addressed well before canon did so, and pulled it off in a concise and compelling way. I also like how you addressed Chloe being involved - it's very accurate to her state of mind in season 3, and I appreciate that you didn't push the redemption thing like so many other fics do. Additionally, your pacing, flow, and word choice are great. Very well done both technically and thematically. 10/10
Yeah, tbh I have no idea whats going on with canon, I stopped watching after season 3. Now I'm kinda curious to see how everything turned out but I probably wont watch the show again askçdjfaklds. I'm glad you've enjoyed this fic so much, I really appreciate all your kind words. Thanks for reading!
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