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  1. Isabella Victoria (Guest) on Chapter 6 Fri 21 Apr 2023 08:34PM UTC

    Heya. So the story had an interesting start but it got a bit too dark for me.

    Wanted to share though because the story did grip me. Just the Hedwig part made me want to throw up and now I’m shaking.

    I’m sure there will be a turn around but it all just unraveled so fast there.

    Something to consider, the likely hood of Harry opening up to trust any of the Malfoys or Voldemort is almost impossible as you have just killed off Harry’s last positive influence with Hedwig. Ideally having either Hedwig or Sirius still around would stabilize him enough to stay rational.

    I can’t see anything but a dark, cruel, violent Harry forming from the abandonment of his “friends” which seems to have hints of playing him all along plus those two critical deaths back to back.

    I look forward to coming back after the story had a dozen more chapters to see whatcha did with it.

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    1. Ashlaria466 on Chapter 6 Tue 16 May 2023 09:13AM UTC

      Heya to you too ☺️
      Thanks for your comment hearing that it gripped you was an amazing compliment 💜
      There is a turn around, and there is a reason it all happened so quick and it's to do with your next point. This is about being completely broken to the point of no return and no Harry won't open up in that traditional sense harry will be molded. And don't worry Hedwig isn't quite gone the newest chapter sets some stuff up.
      This is a pretty dark story and it's not for everyone. I'm really glad you gave it a try and I really really appreciate it cutie 💜 hopefully when you come back I've done good by you ☺️

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