I WAS RIGHT, HE LOGGED INTO WINCRAFT, THE HYPIXEL SKYBLOCK EXPERIENCE.
//sooner than you can say What the f- Tommy had the Guy down on the floor, his sword discarded and wooden tip pressed against a throat.//
This was cool as hell!! It's kind of funny how few badass c!Tommy moments we get in ur fics, bc he's usually too busy Causing Problems. Not a critique, this is just man's resting state. So this was awesome!!
//Well, now that Tommy was done proving he was a menace to society//
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I was planning on commenting more today but unfortunately it is my busiest day ): I will return tomorrow!
uh um uhm — oh well, yeah he logged into wincraft haha,,, :')
God I used to write such in the moment descriptions of badassery what happened to me now (/lh I just find such fun in describing moments of pure desperation recently lmaoooo). Oh heck I didn't even realize LMAOO I keep underwhelming my favorite character(s) so that must change ! >:D
Heehee I especially love that part. I don't read it too often but sometimes I reread the chapters to get back in the writing flow and I just. My smile grows so wide at that part. The way I used to write Tommy is so fun I gotta get back into it!!!
That's alright Fay!!! Prioritize the important things in ur life!!! >:DD
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