Comment on There's A Spark

  1. diedinacarcrash on Chapter 8 Sun 26 Feb 2023 04:28PM UTC

    AHSHHGHWAWAAAGAGAW NO D-:
    UR WRITING IS SOSOSOSOSOOSOOOO GOOD!!???!?!? LIEK WHAT???? its rlly well written, and youre weirdly good at picking out the perfect words, like some people choose fancy words for the sake of it, but you just KNOW the right word!

    and the "Soft lips parted, and warm breath filled the inches between them as Hyde looked up at him, crimson eyes glassy and warm." bit IS SO WELL WRITTEN. like its not overly cheesey, its just SO SWEET. also you write hydes borderline alcoholism is so amazing

    you always add just the right amount of detail to things aswell, like the fact that it was a sherpa blanket wasnt a huge turning point in the fic, but it made me smile, these lil details just make it feel a whole lot more real!

    also im eating a jello straw rn and i just wanted you to know how delicious it is because i feel the need to share my joy

    IM SO EXCITED TO READ THE REST OF THIS

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