Hi! I’m honored to receive such a long comment and a first ever comment at that! I think your usage of “telling” is pretty accurate and thank you for taking the time to think of it, too. Like something you won’t find on the news or in textbooks— only though word of mouth or lines or on a hidden community forum.
I wanted to get across a feeling of fragility, a moment to yourself that is calming but lonely, the sorrows that few people know it. I’m so happy you got the atmosphere I wanted to convey, and described it so well, too!
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A_Viscari Mon 20 Feb 2023 03:32AM UTC
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