Comment on The Ones She Had Lost

1. cmk418 Wed 08 Feb 2023 03:30AM UTC

   

   That was intense. I liked how you worked the lyrics to the song into the story and it had to be terribly lonely for Dany at that point to know she was the last of her family to survive and the attraction to join them would have been very strong.

   I also liked the description of Viserys and his crown and possibly shows some of the guilt that Dany might still carry for his death.

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2. 1. RoselynnThornwood Wed 08 Feb 2023 09:13PM UTC

      

      Thank you for such a thoughtful comment! I’m glad you noticed the detail in Viserys’s crown. I was absolutely going for touching on Dany’s trauma from watching him die such a gruesome death. I enjoy working in those small but powerful elements, so I’m happy readers catch them. ♥️

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