What a spectacular vision of what things could have looked like after the battle. You wrote conflict exceptionally well, and you definitely did a great job of embodying the voices of both Harry and Ginny. So much good stuff that I desperately want to be true for the two of them. Fantastic writing!
Thank you so much! I'm especially glad you liked how I wrote conflict, they are two characters who are very respectful of each other and understand one another extremely well, therefore they make it necessary to be particularly careful when you write them fighting
They're characters who learned conflict so differently growing up, but I think it speaks to their care for each other that they learn to deal with their conflicts in healthier ways.
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