wow wow wow 😳😳 i feel like you took my emotions on a roller coaster this chapter!!! so much happened for the NA brothers. firstly, alfred and his internship. i have to say, i was just as tortured by the experience as he was LOL it sounded so dry, and you did a great job making kyle a detestable oc foe for him to hate. i can't imagine alfred surviving the entirety of this internship. i'm also floored every time you allude to how successful arthur and francis are and i can't imagine having parents like that!! omg. which brings me to matthew. my oh my, you've always had a knack for writing angst and torturing your favs but this time you've brought it to a new level 😂😂 i was blown away (in a good way!) by how you described his migraine attack. it sounded horrible!! but i really appreciated you putting alfred there because i think that really highlighted how dangerous matthew's behavior has become for his own health—pushing his limits until he's literally ill. literally have no idea how the family will handle this going forward but i'm so anxious to find out!!!! can't wait for the next update!! write like the wind, my friend ❤️️❤️️❤️️
haha oh kyle. i enjoyed making him so annoying lol. yeah arthur and francis are intense :"D i think writing matthew's attack was really quite cathartic in some ways and also it just made plot sense. it's just an escalation in reckless behaviour because matthew's concept of "consequences" is really messed up. next chapter should be fun, he he he he >:) thank you so much for reading!!!!
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