oh my god. oh my god im so soft. it's 2 am so i'm not coherent but okay so first off i love love LOVE eddie im this. second off, the setting of it! i haven't read many steddie friends in HS and this one takes the cake bc it's so cute and toothrottengly perfect. third off, i love the alternating povs. the timeline was perfect and it meshed so well w the fic and the cuteness and the cheesiness. i love the kids gift to steve, i love max, i love steve, i love eddie, and it's just. this is smth i will come back to whenever i need a pickup thank you so much for writing this and sharing it w us readers!
Ahhh thank you SO much for this comment!!! I'm so glad you liked my Eddie, he was so fun to write! And I was super anxious about the alternating pov/the time line cause I actually wrote them separately (started off just Steve's pov but couldn't resist doing a couple of Eddie scenes and it just got out of hand haha) and edited it together; so glad it ended up working, thank you!! I'm so happy it made you feel good and that its something you'll read again! Thank you!!!
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