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  1. Lilith_Melinoe on Chapter 1 Fri 09 Dec 2022 12:21AM UTC

    I love this, it is so cool! Callum and Aarovos are such an interesting and underrated duo and you wrote them both so well!

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    1. Talia_Black on Chapter 1 Fri 09 Dec 2022 03:22AM UTC

      Thank you for commenting :)

      I rewrote Aaravos' lines so many times. He has such a smooth way of speaking it was incredibly difficult to mesh with Callum's more awkward and blunt tone. I also tried to make Callum a little more mature, since he's technically 18-19ish which I think worked out well.

      Glad you liked it!

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