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  1. UnholyOffspringxX on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Dec 2022 11:04AM UTC

    Hiiii!! i love this story! i think you did an awesome job describing the panic attack, and i love how you wrote both the characters. also just so you know, near the beginning, there's a slight typo where Aarovos says "I have intentions of killing you" when i thinkkkkkk it was supposed to say 'i have no intentions to kill you" but, super awesome stuff, cant wait for the next chapter :))))

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    1. Talia_Black on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Dec 2022 12:01PM UTC

      Thank you so much for the comment! I fixed the typo. This is what I get for writing at midnight. Thank you so much for reading ♥️

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      1. UnholyOffspringxX on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Dec 2022 12:11PM UTC

        No worries!! <33333

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