Comment on like a thief loves a gallery

1. mopeytropey (scriptmanip) Sun 13 Nov 2022 12:08AM UTC

   

   well congratu-fucking-lations, I will now only be thinking of this BRILLIANTLY written story for the foreseeable future. a complete and utter joy to read from top to bottom, and I legitimately cackled out loud when Alex bursts out of the spare hotel room questioning “Why was that woman,” Alex grits out, “wearing my fucking jacket?” Ha!!! Fucking brilliant I tell you. Snappy dialogue, not a line out of place or OOC. the vignettes and time jumps were perfectly paced and so well executed I kept putting it down and walking away so as to savor it for longer. so many slow hand claps – incredible writing as always 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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2. 1. lovepotionnumber5 Mon 14 Nov 2022 10:33PM UTC

      

      thank you sm!!!! wow this comment made me :))))))))))) haha very nice very cool!

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