Everything about this is so visceral and raw, it felt like watching it on a screen. And both Jamie and Roy's POVs were perfectly in character and so very heartbreaking. Incredible first chapter!! <3<3<3
ahhhh thank you so much, that's such a high compliment!! and povs are so interesting and fun to work with, to see what's different in one voice or another, it's always absolutely wonderful to hear that i've gotten them right <3. i'm glad you liked it!!
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