a b (Guest)
on Chapter 8
Tue 09
Aug 202203:42PM UTC
i really enjoyed reading these first eight chapters. the storybuilding and tension you have created, winding the little details Coffee Shop gives us about these two characters, just great. and the tempo of the slowly building relationship? spectacular. i will be so excited to read more, should you write it
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