"Yet tonight, finally, Jason has the man cornered on the roof of a particularly tall building, both guns raised towards his opponent’s head while the Pit screams in his own."
I loved this line, along with so many others, but this one in particular really caught my attention. The entire chapter was amazing though. Peter's dialogue was absolutely perfect, and the description of everything happening was beautifully written. Jason's inner monologue was just as spot on too. You have such a great grasp of both characters. The entire story concept has me curious as heck to see how it plays out. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
God, that means the absolute world to me, thank you so much! I love these two so much and I'm happy to hear that I've captured them even a little. Thank you for reading!
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LadyWulfe on Chapter 1 Wed 03 Aug 2022 07:25PM UTC
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