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1. QueenOfTheQuill on Chapter 1 Fri 03 Jun 2022 10:02PM UTC

   

   Oh no, Jay. You're really in for it now. I don't trust this! I don't trust it at all! Mostly because even if Bruce has good intentions, I feel like he's not going to be a great parent here, and if he has bad intentions, it's goign to be so much worse. You crafted the atmosphere of Jason, surrounded by more and more suspicious hints at Bruce's life, so perfectly.

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2. 1. wildsofmarch on Chapter 1 Sat 04 Jun 2022 11:56PM UTC

      

      Jay being sucked into the mob life is like that slippery slope metaphor -- first it's all fun and games. And then it gets real 😬

      I'm glad you like how mysterious and ambiguous Bruce's behaviour is. 😅

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