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1. Papaya__a on Chapter 1 Mon 15 Feb 2016 03:57AM UTC

   

   Wonderful, really, it is. If you are not to deep withen the plo, please at least read over this suggestion. I understand that Tom is some scary drug and mafia and scary shit dude, but Harry is supposed to be the 'leader of the light' correct? If so, woul

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2. 1. Papaya__a on Chapter 1 Mon 15 Feb 2016 04:00AM UTC

      

      d it not make sense to have Harry as a figure exempt from rules, as a 'golden boy'? If you listen to this, I would be tremendously pleased, as Miss Rowling might say, a writer she, as the go of writing, bestowed on the readers. Having Harry exempt from the

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   2. 1. Papaya__a on Chapter 1 Mon 15 Feb 2016 04:03AM UTC

         

         rules could make him a very interesting character, and it would be very fun to have someone more powerful then Tom to be so loyal to him, but still have moments where Harry would bitchslap Tom without any remorse if need be. Having Harry have a private arm

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      2. 1. Papaya__a on Chapter 1 Mon 15 Feb 2016 04:05AM UTC

            

            y would be interesting as well, I suppose. Anyway, thanks forlistening to this rather long and mistake ridden comment, I am sorry for all the breaks, andI understand if this would simply just not fit into the story. Thank You, Alice

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