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  1. PantheraTigris1 on Chapter 5 Tue 22 Mar 2022 03:07PM UTC

    Hi!
    I'm sorry that the language bothers you!
    The kids swearing has less to do with them being badasses, and more to do with them growing up surrounded by criminals. But I don't think I actually wrote that bad curse words, besides "fuck"? I'm sorry, English is not my native language, so I might have missed some worse connotations. (Also, I didn't exactly reread this story to discover every single swearword I used-)
    Anyway, could you please point me in the right direction? I'd be happy to edit if you point something truly outrageous to me.

    Also, I'll edit the tags to include "swearing". I thought I already did that, but apparently I didn't.

    Last Edited Tue 22 Mar 2022 03:10PM UTC

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