Jaksjsjahdhshags I DO NOT HAVE WORDS i couldn't stop awing at tommy bonding with the gang, i cheered when Tommy decided that he wanted to keep his friends, i gasped in horror and said OH NO out loud when Tommy saw a piece of paper on the floor and was glued to my phone screen until techno found him. And oh, when Tommy stood up to his coach! Tommy stood up to his coach and his team had his back!!!! And then i yelled YEAHHHH GO TECHNO when he just knocked that bastard out. And Tommy smiling on the ice....i love this whole thing. There are sooooo many little moments that just blew me away - Tommy hesitating to take Wilbur's hand to help him up at the start and then taking Techno's hand when he fell playing hockey, Sapnap going after Tommy saying "i won't leave a teammate alone on yhe ice", the way you contrasted snowflake - used against tommy, cold, icy, the numbness he felt - to sunshine - a nickname given out of love, how Tommy was happy and free and it SHOWED when he skated!!!! Tommy being proud of himself and the work he's done!!!! Phil and Niki coming through at the end (Phil's reaction to Tommy's coach on the floor had me rolling) and telling Tommy, convinced there was no one to back him up, that he has a lot of people in his corner. I love it all. I got excited when i saw two writers i enjoy working on a fic together and it STILL blew me away.
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